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Michelle (2000)
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Michelle (2000) |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand 
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482 Michelle 18 March 2000 Michelle is her name given by birth claim Sure she does exist written in songs that twist Young, old and a mother wife, sister with a brother This woman of vision caught up in lifes collision Angel of the soul filling her feminine role with qualities of purpose bound to surface She therefore is a symbol of the ideal rule Her home may not be here but she is everywhere “FOR the law having a shadow of good things to come, and not the very image of the things, can never with those sacrifices which they offered year by year continually make the comers thereunto perfect. But in those sacrifices there is a remembrance again made of sins every year. Wherefore when he cometh into the world, he saith, Sacrifice and offering thou wouldest not, but a body hast thou prepared me: By the which will we are sanctified through the offering of the body of Jesus Christ once for all.” Hebrews 10: 1, 3, 5, 10 KJV a poet who cares |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some are delivered to us, just as this is special, so is she. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
poet "Her home may not be here but she is everywhere" My daughter's name! She died after 8 years, yet those words above are how she remains. Although I know you didn't write this for her, thank you anyway! http://martie.netpoets.net/poetry/poetryformichelle.html |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes Martie, when I saw the title, I thought this must have been written for you...and in a way it was, because there are so many Michelles....now another we will know of. This poem's beautiful, and beautifully conceived...and it wrings the heart. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
after Sunshine made her note to this poem post, I was left to try and remember why I choose to post this poem in the thread here. Now I do remember, my reason I went and found my works in the name of Michelle. Which in this case was composed one day, in a general outlook, because there were so many Michelle's out there. If not in being actors on TV shows, or other reasons, the name was ringing in my mind, that set off what became my poem. I posted this poem here on this site however, in honour of one particular Michelle. Since I went to your web site Martie, and saw what I saw. I am into web creation myself, the site listed on my profile , is an extention of my mind, and was created without using software and developed by myself. Nevertheless I never knew how to make a web page until May 2004, and back then I had seen and only visited a handful of web sites. When thanks to Sunshine, this poem did not get lost on page two and an abyss without getting a comment. As some of my posts have. All the reason I remain hesitant to the value and purpose of the poetry I post here on PiP Now I have been known to make web pages for fun a poet who cares |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Christopher "When thanks to Sunshine, this poem did not get lost on page two and an abyss without getting a comment. As some of my posts have. All the reason I remain hesitant to the value and purpose of the poetry I post here on PiP" I think we have all experienced that poem we have posted getting no replies...it is indeed hard and it makes you wonder why. I'm glad this was here so that I could see it and then find that it was indeed for my Michelle. Thank you for that!  |
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