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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2006-03-01 12:54 PM


I was searching
for the pieces
to finnish your puzzle
here's a piece
there's a piece
everywhere a piece piece

I'd rather play connect the dots
then let them sink into my head
the gnawing is keeping me up at night
and my hair isn't growing back fast enough
here's a piece
there's a piece
everywhere a piece piece

dirty dirty hands
clasped
into dirty dirty handshakes
but
we've been taught
they could achieve no more
dirt breeds dirt
here's a piece
there's a piece
everywhere a piece piece

you're worth nothing
but the page you're written on

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Air Goddess
Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108
Canada
1 posted 2006-03-01 10:39 PM


I like the way you wrote this...
"you're worth nothing
but the page you're written on"

It would be great if it was possible
to erase some people's page and rewrite
it, eh?  Oh well, hopefully it is recyclable some day.... lol.  Great poetry!

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