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latearrival
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0 posted 2006-03-01 12:46 PM


            Life's Journey  
          From There to Here
          
        Thinking back to graham crackers,
          and taking naps upon the mat.
                        
         To fast food servers,
          filling endless cups of coffee,
           While old men sit and chat.

jo perry Feb 2006

© Copyright 2006 martyjo - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
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1 posted 2006-03-01 03:02 AM




Very good

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-03-01 07:42 AM


a grand rise of morning...
enjoyed...

latearrival
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3 posted 2006-03-01 11:24 AM


Hearing from two of the best is thrill enough to make my morning! thank you both, martyjo
Martie
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4 posted 2006-03-01 04:49 PM


I just got back from Mcdonalds with my ganddaughters....they love the place and I'm sure their memories will go back there when they are older with fond memories of the times we spent there.
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-03-01 05:23 PM




I love this poem jo... both ends of the spectrum. There's something so comforting about children and graham crackers and old men and coffee. It's just perfect.


latearrival
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6 posted 2006-03-01 06:44 PM


Martie and The Lady, Thanks  for the reply...And Lady, I am so sorry I wrote your pen name wrong. I absent mindedly wrote My Lady.Hope I can still change that. martyjo
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