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Kind of Sunshine - a piptalk reign
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Kind of Sunshine - a piptalk reign |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand 
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5081 Queens of Angels 13 February 2006 Where was heaven that day in Los Angeles born This city in need of understanding when more was to branch forth As to a tree of paper wood a jungle of cement to retreat Would she know her true passion those words her heart were to seek Time and memorial Michigan State Two daughters - one child destination a place of legal being Weather to storm Pygmalion to “Peggy Sue” Eliza and an Ontarian lake far from California on her road to tranquillity a poet who cares |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at you. Thank you, Sir. You are indeed, very kind. I think it incumbent of me to tell you that my brother enjoyed drawing all sorts of cars, back in the late 60's. He had a flair, yes, he did... and your username reminds me of some good times. Again, my thanks. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
I can never be sure how accurate my virtual poetry is , so of my above works, and still being in its original form. I can only but hope errors are not the reality of my plater When one reason why and how I composed 1000 poems in the past 6 months, was because I selfishly write my words for others. Not all however do understand, a talent shared - a poet who cared as for the 'Poet to the Cars' that is as much a play on words as the words them self. A poet to the cars , who really does write car poems - but much is based on matters only Antipodeans truly understand and can be holden to in that relationship. Holden is more than a word, in Australia, so New Zealand, General Motors truly do make and manufacture a HOLDEN Marque of car. So of which are marketed in the USA as a Pontiac GTO and Chevrolet in South Africa and the Middle East. It gets too complicated from there on, except for King James Version scriptures, in use of the word 'Holden' a poet who cares |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
poettothecars This was wonderful...you got her so well and with the light that shines from her so beautifully. Thank you for this!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
both the poem and your comment were enjoyable pleasure to read |
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