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Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
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Under the stars upon the wind

0 posted 2006-02-28 03:23 PM



Sometimes I know you aren’t sure
Your heart wants to believe me but your eyes question
Sometimes I know you get frustrated
You never mean to show impatience but your voice says it

I know you love me deeply
Your hands and your smile prove it
I know you treasure every moment
You never try to hide it your tenderness radiates

But baby did you know..

Sometimes my heart flutters when you walk into the room
I look at you and wonder does he know I am staring?
Sometimes at night I cry, not out anger, just longing for you.
I hear your voice soothing and wonder does he know I need him?

I love you without reserve
The smile that only you make me have proves it.
I treasure every moment I spend near you within me
Look in my eyes, baby don’t question, now you know.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

© Copyright 2006 Jennifer K.G. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-02-28 03:52 PM


This is a beautiful declaration of your love Jennifer.
Why don't you show this to him.  
Hugs~Nancy


~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2006-02-28 05:43 PM


Jennifer, this is so heartfelt....hope he reads it!
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-03-01 10:59 PM




Heartfelt and heartbreaking at the same time. Sigh…yes, let him read it.


Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-03-01 11:06 PM


What a lovely love write, Jennifer. Hope you give this to him.
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