navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » And You Were Love
Open Poetry #37
Post A Reply Post New Topic And You Were Love Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2006-02-28 11:45 AM



And You Were Love
~*Marge Tindal*~

And you......were love
waiting for a place to begin
I opened up this little heart
hoping you would come on in
you did and conquered me
a love so tenderly true
it's no wonder to me
that I love you
as I do
~



~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2006 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2006-02-28 12:11 PM


Very pretty love poem, Marge!!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

desert-spike
Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194
TX/USA
2 posted 2006-02-28 12:37 PM


That was beautiful Marge. *huglets*
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-02-28 12:46 PM


You do these shape ones so beautifully Marge!
And the words on this?  Perfect!!  
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2006-02-28 01:18 PM


Oh, Margie Willow White Feather....this is so sweet!  Have a good day!   ...jo
sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
5 posted 2006-02-28 03:19 PM


Wow, could almost feel it beating, Marge.  That's a beauty!

   Rae

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2006-02-28 04:55 PM


Wonderful...James
SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2006-02-28 05:49 PM


This is fantastic. I like the way you do these.
latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
8 posted 2006-02-28 06:02 PM


Very nice. Only you come up with these and you do it well.  martyjo
Trillium
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
9 posted 2006-02-28 08:03 PM


Dear Marge:  Lovely and so glad you have a special someone to love!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Ratleader
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
10 posted 2006-02-28 08:35 PM


That's how it should be....and may it be ever so for you!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

jody5
Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
11 posted 2006-02-28 09:00 PM


Brilliant Marge.  I wish I could be so inspired.

Huggs  Kim


UniqueFreak
Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 62
Scotland
12 posted 2006-02-28 09:19 PM


i love this too... so sweet... terrific. Stephi x
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
13 posted 2006-02-28 09:32 PM


Beautiful Marge!!!!!   I'm a sucker for this stuff....You know that???  

I thought I'd say "Hi" since I usually only pop in here ever so silently!!!!  

HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


MGROVES
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
14 posted 2006-02-28 10:26 PM


always a pleasure to see your beauty

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
15 posted 2006-02-28 10:28 PM


Love always looks so *cool* flowing from your pen!  

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
16 posted 2006-02-28 11:30 PM


Just beautiful...love sure looks good on you.
HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
17 posted 2006-03-01 01:18 AM


How sweet , love most beautifully expressed

Hope  

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060
White Birch Forest
18 posted 2006-03-01 09:03 AM


So heartfelt, warm and tender. You do write fabuloous love poems. Your Bill is so lucky to have you.

huggles, Marti

Every blade of grass has its angel
that bends over it and whispers,
"grow, grow."

suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
19 posted 2006-03-01 09:20 AM


Were... are... and will be. *S* And that's when you know how blessed you are. *S*

Beautiful work!!

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
20 posted 2006-03-01 12:59 PM



Thanks everyone~
My heart pours the ink ... and I share~

Lee ?
I'm impressed with the beauty of the song you posted~
Thank you ... and thank you for including the chords and giving proper credit to the piece ... I'm going to share this with my Bill~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
21 posted 2006-03-01 01:49 PM


a full heart, and the cup runneth over...

beautiful!

~ Klassy ~

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
22 posted 2006-03-01 01:53 PM


And you are amazing!
Great art and poetry.


JL


The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
23 posted 2006-03-01 10:50 PM




Lovely Marge and simply amazing how you make the shape.


icequeen
Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633
FL USA
24 posted 2006-03-01 11:52 PM


Hello Marge ~~ I see you are still painting out those pretty words
It is sooooooo good to see you again!


Caroline

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

FNG
Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

25 posted 2006-03-02 04:27 AM


'I opened up this little heart
hoping you would come on in
you did and conquered me'

Romantic...



tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
26 posted 2006-03-03 04:44 AM


Oh Margie girl~
this is so lovely, perfect words and perfect shape.
Winged ~hugs~ my friend
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
27 posted 2006-03-03 10:27 AM


loved it
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
28 posted 2006-03-04 04:53 PM



You all bless me with your thoughts~
Thank you~

It's a BEAUTIFUL day to be a poetess in love~

Bill, I love you baby~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » And You Were Love

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary