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Huan Yi
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A few soft notes
Struck once
Echoed over mountains

Across deserts oceans
To move to a cabin
By a secluded shore

There they play
At dawn
By the light of the moon
Under silent stars

And Orpheus though dead
Remembering love . . .
What it was to fly

Stirs in his sleep
And sighs


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This is beauitful.I could almost hear the notes echoing. So descriptive.
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And sigh he always will...because having flown the skys of those other places, he knows there is more, and the quiet lakeshore is just a picture of tranquility....a screen and no more.

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read abd enjoyed each words but I may have lost some meaning.
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