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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-02-28 08:02 AM


Letting

By letting acts of whimsical
Form into something fanciful
We take the engine of a force
To make illusion be our course

To reign as king in everything
To make the world that we would bring
To wrap ourselves in graces shawl
To simply be the belle of the ball

To be just once that shining light
A Casanova of the night
That Romeo that lover boy
With just a touch and not a ploy

It offers you a trick or more
To ride a magic carpet or
Slip within a shawl of grace
By offering a rose and lace

A passport into travels awe
A trip into a seem or more


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-02-28 08:05 AM



Methinks you're the trip
that lights my day, Sy...

Good morning, m'friend.








StevenS
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2 posted 2006-02-28 08:09 AM


Morning Sy, You nailed it again! Reality sux! :-)
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-02-28 08:29 AM


Good morning Sy!
Thank you for starting my day
with with wonderful magic carpet ride.
Tea is on...I'll pour.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-02-28 11:12 AM


Sunshine
If so I am happy.

StevenS
Thank you my friend.

Nancy,
A little cream in mine please.

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-02-28 10:19 PM




"Slip within a shawl of grace
By offering a rose and lace"

Oh my! This is simply lovely.


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6 posted 2006-02-28 10:54 PM


beauty, rose and lace~
smile, with grace~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

exhale
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7 posted 2006-03-01 01:08 AM


This was wonderful.
Thank you.

iliana
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8 posted 2006-03-01 01:30 AM


Such a romantic, you are, Sir Sy!  Enjoyed this!   ....jo
Klassy Lassy
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9 posted 2006-03-01 08:16 PM


Such lovely whimsy, to be a knight's damsel.  This makes me think of glass slippers and wishes, a spin around a dance floor in evening arms of anticipation.  Those moments may be rare, but they are the ones which shine for a lifetime.

Lovely.

~ Karen ~

lgina
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10 posted 2006-03-01 09:07 PM


I really enjoy your writes Mr. Tabin. Thank you for making me think about what is really taking place in our day to day.  Keep up the good writes.



shades of paul
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11 posted 2006-03-01 09:10 PM


You have a way with words...enjoyed...paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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