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2CatchASwan2
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0 posted 2006-02-28 03:45 AM


music is my muse,this was inspired be the smashing pumpkins "there it goes"


it starts again
the remaining days ive laid the same
the punishing pillow
venting sorrowful melodies
from the reach to a grasp
i held the reins of love
the refelction is still in my gaze
i see the fanciful wants and wishes
this day seemed like a day to loose
the clouds were ready for me to fall apart
gray as my heart
night black as my certainty
the stars are options in my path
the moon is my guiding thought
green and blue and gold and you
green and blue and gold and you

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1 posted 2006-02-28 03:50 AM


I would part with many dollars, or many other things, to have been the one who coined these words.

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2CatchASwan2
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2 posted 2006-02-28 04:19 AM


thank you ratleader,that means alot to me
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-02-28 08:07 AM



Good morning, Swan...

I enjoyed your first posting,
and hope to catch more of your posts
as you glide along the blue halls.

Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your email for a Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

StevenS
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4 posted 2006-02-28 08:45 AM


Bravo 2CatchASwan2, Beautiful words! :-) Welcome!
Enchantress
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5 posted 2006-02-28 08:59 AM


Wonderful first post!
Welcome to Passions..
I much enjoyed the read
and look forward to seeing
more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

shades of paul
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6 posted 2006-02-28 09:06 AM


Nice First post, welcolme.......paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-02-28 10:33 AM


2CatchASwan2
A goodly read. Enjoyeed

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just out of reach
8 posted 2006-02-28 11:28 AM


Welcome To Passions !!
much enjoyed your first post
hugs, Chris

Martie
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9 posted 2006-02-28 11:33 AM


I liked this very much....you wrote my favorite colors, but I find them joyful not sad.  Welcome to Passions!
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Gaia
10 posted 2006-03-02 12:17 PM


oh, beautiful write! Enjoyed the FEEL of this.
Welcome to Passions!

The Lady
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11 posted 2006-03-02 12:23 PM




Whoa Catch... nice work. Welcome.

aujussy wolf
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12 posted 2006-03-03 12:11 PM


the clouds were ready for me to fall apart
gray as my heart
night black as my certainty
the stars are options in my path
the moon is my guiding thought
green and blue and gold and you
green and blue and gold and you




... I like your style of poetry , well done !!
- wolf

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

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