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Bobby
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Bobby |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643
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He was only misguided some say fragile, with an awkward sense listening to the music in his head bumping down the street, seizure like passer-by-ers they no need to understand his own world his own time yes’um it was his alright picking grubs and hook’n ‘em clean at the fishing hole every Sunday no church God played in his music they say Bobby was misguided |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
An excellent portrait Page. Well done. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank You Madame |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
very nice poem. i enjoyed it, so short but so much said an understood I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
He may have been misguided. He also may have known God better than anyone in that sanctimonious sanctuary, mightn't he? The God I know is comfortable in both places, and much more likely to be felt down at the fishin' hole, if you remember to say hello to Him there. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you both... and Ratleader, I totally agree... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dominique... thank you for this part of Bobby.  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
You are very welcome Sunshine. I am glad you enjoyed it.  |
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