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lgina
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0 posted 2006-02-27 09:44 PM



Looking into the past I cannot see.

Looking forward I know not what lies ahead.

The past seems to run faster than the present.

OH, wait now I see.

All the things I've missed, the wrong I've done,the love I never recieved.

I don't want to see.

Moving ahead seems to make me slower.

Stop the ghosts that chase me, there are many, ones I have never seen.

Lay me down to feel the rush go over me, the end must be near.

The end is never far when we seek to hang on to those things we never recieved.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-02-27 10:02 PM



The grasp of this
leaves a gasp in whisp...

hold on.


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2 posted 2006-02-27 10:42 PM


beautiful

             xoxo
            Jessica    
              :)
         Character is what
        you do when you think
       that no one is lookin

Martie
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3 posted 2006-02-27 10:44 PM


Yes, hang on, Gina...and take my hand.  I understand this.  
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-02-27 10:50 PM


lgina
A good write, enjoyed the read.

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-02-27 11:42 PM




" The past seems to run faster than the present."

Great line. Great write.


marcel
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6 posted 2006-02-28 11:44 PM


true words, when experience becomes our teacher and our saving grace...good job on this emotional reality...
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