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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-03-09 07:55 AM


The File

My age has left a file I see
The visual of changing me
But non here show of wile or dream
This misty life of dream and seem

I’ve walked a path among the weeds
With only ghosts of wishes needs
Where perfume of the flowers scent
Forever spill my dreamers vent

Where in the mist of vapors plume
Only phantoms did I bloom
The sweet of grace the warm embrace
That bloomed within this garden space

There I paint and wrote my soul
So very few can see that goal
For most can only see facade
The leavings of a bards bone yard

And with this piece I leave a stone
For those that pass and I have known


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2006-03-09 09:15 AM


Good morning,
Sweet Sonneteering Man!

Thy quill is one of misty vapor plume
May thy word garden, forever bloom.
Thy mots do touch with warm embrace
For they be sage and full of grace.

FlowersFlowersWritingFlowersFlowers

Have a glorious day!
EA


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-03-09 11:58 AM


Earth Angel
Thank you love for stopping by on your
angel rounds.

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-03-09 04:11 PM




Keep writing your soul Sy. It's a beauty. This poem speaks volumes.


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-03-09 05:22 PM


Lady
Once again my humble thanks.

icequeen
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5 posted 2006-03-09 06:53 PM


Oh Mr. T... how do I love thee.. let you write the ways because no one can outdo your sonnets   Once again, its grand stuff!

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

Sunshine
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6 posted 2006-03-09 07:35 PM


As ever, Sy, you wind the heart
as if string into a ball...

just so the cat in you can play,
maybe tomorrow.

Always, always, I find a levelness,
a piece of peace, a hint of hope...

a knowing of time tolled...

but my dear Poet, you keep talking,
put it down in some form that we will
always, always remember, even if we have
to tattoo it on our hearts.

And you know how much I dislike needles!

But to tattoo your words?  Yes, I would
do that for you.


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-03-09 07:59 PM


icequeen
The nectar of your say has sweetened my day.

Sunshine
You have said what I am seeking. Someday to find the words to needleless tattoo gods grace into the mind if that is possible.
Perhaps with a phrase or a praise.

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8 posted 2006-03-10 01:55 PM


This is wonderful, my friend... I loved every line! *S*
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-03-10 02:53 PM


suthern
And I loved every word of your comment.

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