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ghettogurl13
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0 posted 2006-02-27 12:02 PM


Desire,
Hidden deep,
burning hope inside,
a needed destiny corrupts,
Desire  

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desert-spike
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1 posted 2006-02-27 12:42 PM


That it does, and you tell it well.
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2 posted 2006-02-28 02:01 AM


awesome writing g-girl 'welcome to pip , later -wolf

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

Kathy
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3 posted 2006-02-28 02:28 AM


Oh...my!

I like it...No...I love it!!!

Hugs,
Kathy

iliana
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4 posted 2006-02-28 02:45 AM


Well said!
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5 posted 2006-02-28 03:54 AM


I read this hours ago but wasn't up to answering....now I'm back, and I still don't have a response...except to say that I believe there are things which come to us in this world, that are intended. I don't have a better word for it. Maybe you see something, or you hear the song of the soul, and it may not be your own soul that you hear, nor (you think) anything to do with you, whatever it is you see....and you suddenly know that whatever is, is intended and has been for all of the world's time.

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