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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2006-02-26 07:15 AM


Something you must understand:
people who don't know
take turns
dancing with the shadows of
the elbows dressed in black & white
trained to trail a train of silk
they seek
a different end than us -

they greet
each other with a kiss
as though
they practiced fluttering
with a hand-held fan
daydream
of blushing natural between
the fronds of plastic
snapped in screen
mocking whisper
from behind
dangling
a
knot
and glossed
fringes giggle
bells of Saint
Mary's she begins to
ring
the parliament to home,
we sing,
"Hail Ye Ancient Holy Queen"

we free

the very hairs upon our chests.

Waving resolute
we bleed
the glory
from the pores
of need
in absolution
of ourselves
singing "Ave"
in the streets
as they hose the piss, they play
screaming our remorse

(of course)

as we worship
mother's mead
washing sins away
we seek

a better way to die.

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2006-02-26 08:14 AM


hmm...some day I shall get there...and when I do~~~



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2 posted 2006-02-26 08:18 AM



Watched a bit of news last night
of areas where a friend
survived ~
wondered how the gaiety
[and beads] would
ever come alive
when the ruins are
round the corner
where the feet won't
dance the street ~
and wondered what the
joy might be
behind any mask's
defeat

Wondered too
of swelling tears
that may, or not,
release ~
in silent ache
a prayered blessing
that my friend find
a certain
peace.

~*~

Take the high road
of incredible

and know my thoughts are with you.


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just out of reach
3 posted 2006-02-26 10:27 AM


I suppose as with any celebration, each pair of eyes see something different in the "mask" and hear their own tune.
You're awesome.
hugs, Chris

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4 posted 2006-02-26 11:39 AM


We are watching it all on the cams, and loving the spirit of the people there.  One day I shall be there, but for now I am here there with you.
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-02-26 10:35 PM



Your love for your subject shines like crystal. Beautifully done serenity...  thank you.

iliana
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6 posted 2006-02-27 02:42 AM


Your poem, K-Lady is perfect....and Karilea's, too.  Can't get much better than that or more meaningful.   ....jo

PS:  What is some of the language used for the occasion?  I've never been....but I believe there is a greeting or a wish or something that ya'll say.....tell me, pleaseeeeee (along with the translation)....

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7 posted 2006-02-27 05:57 AM


Waving resolute
we bleed
the glory
from the pores
of need
in absolution
of ourselves
singing "Ave"
in the streets
as they hose the piss, they play
screaming our remorse

(of course)

as we worship
mother's mead
washing sins away
we seek

a better way to die.
You are absolutely amazing!

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8 posted 2006-02-27 12:54 PM


      

Hey ya'll!  Happy Mardi Gras!  (suits moi eh?)  
We have been watching the parades, and having fun with you all down there all weekend,
but next time I will be there!  Nola.com does a great job of keeping us in the loop.  

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9 posted 2006-02-27 01:24 PM


Oh I almost forgot!  I sure the money spent on Mardi Gras will generate a lot of revenue for rebuilding your city, and that the money goes to making New Orleans the old girl we all have grown to love as a destination of choice, and a part of America's history.

Have a wonderful Mardi Gras - all of you down there!

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10 posted 2006-02-27 03:42 PM



so good to see the city celebrate life, and have fun.....hope you are enjoying....I'd love to re-visit Mardi Gras again....it's been years....enjoyed this Karen....hugssss

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

kayjay
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11 posted 2006-02-27 05:58 PM


Blessings on you for enabling the living soul of your great city!  It is always a treat to read you, Karen.  Hugs Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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12 posted 2006-02-27 09:35 PM


ahh, and laissez le...
well, you know
wishing you some of those good times

OwlSA
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13 posted 2006-02-28 02:09 PM


Sometimes grief can only be carried in song and dance and smiles.

- Owl

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14 posted 2006-02-28 02:23 PM


After so many months of tears... find whatever joy you can on this day... celebrate surviving. *S*

Laissez les bon temps rouler!

serenity blaze
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15 posted 2006-02-28 04:44 PM


thank you

Although written last year, somehow I thought this one was more appropriate this year.

And I wish I were there, but health and other responsibilities have kept me a silent sideliner again this year, but I am very proud of my city, even as we hear the criticism of whether or not such a celebration is appropriate this year.



That's when something occurred to me. I've been wondering what it is about New Orleans that evokes such strong emotion from the rest of the country, and as I watch, along with so many of you, is that we seem to have a hard time being properly "pitiful."

Until the catastrophe of Katrina, I don't think I recognized how my of my personality was shaped by my environment. And today, I'm very proud of my city--and even as miss some of our displaced residents, I would hope that they understand "why" this was such a vital point of our recovery.

As I told someone (quite snippily too) when I was questioned regarding the wisdom of rebuilding of New Orleans, and I quote me here:

"As long as there is a stick of wood floating through the port of New Orleans, there will be an expletive brass band playing on it!"

My time here may soon be coming to an end, but ya'll surely must have guessed by now, that New Orleans has my heart forever as "home".

I thank you all, who were gracious enough to share our joy of survival and fortitude with us.


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16 posted 2006-03-01 12:26 PM




(smiles) And I am most proud of where you call "home" too in that, despite the terrors of yellow fever, despite the horrors of civil war and now, despite the sorrows of Katrina, you and tens of thousands of other citizens there and millions more nationwide are seeing to it the hope lives on there, and what better way to do so than to keep the culture and diverse personality of the region alive! (angel friendship hugs) I've never lived in New Orleans like you, but I am as happy as a pig in slop that I have gotten to visit the Crescent City a few times prior to Katrina, and would still like to visit again in the near future! God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a wonderful poem, I hope you had (or are still having, LOL!) a Mardi Gras blast and by the way, no, I did not get the king cake baby this year! (giggles) Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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