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smithdr
Junior Member

since 2006-02-25

Posts 26

0 posted 2006-02-25 02:20 PM

woke up early
this morning and
read for an hour
then wrote poetry
for two.

cooked an egg-white
omelet with
mushrooms and red peppers and
onions for breakfast.

went to the gym
at noon and stretched
muscles and tendons
and ligaments.

studied green algae
genetics after my evening
bath and went to bed
early.

was tired,
the night before I drank
two bottles of wine and
drove home
drunk.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-02-25 02:41 PM

smithdr
Reads like a good mix to me. Enjoyed the write

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-02-25 03:29 PM

SDR~
Welcome to PiP~

Not overly fond of the idea of having you
on my streets after the wine binge
... but hope you will enjoy your stay here in poetry land~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2006-02-25 03:30 PM

Really enjoyed this.
Although, I don't agree with drinking and driving. Still, very interesting.

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-02-25 03:32 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Enjoyed your entrance post..
although I don't agree with drinking and driving.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Please check your email for a special greeting~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

5 posted 2006-02-25 03:44 PM

I drink green algie so I enjoyed this write.
Welcome to pip.  I am relatively new too.
Please don't drink & drive you may hurt someone or yourself.

Hugs  Kim

desert-spike
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 194
TX/USA

6 posted 2006-02-25 03:47 PM

I found that very amusing.

Not so much the content, but that you placed a list of daily events into verse. that's brilliant, and funny.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2006-02-25 06:48 PM

Interesting slant....and a great read.

But you might want to call a cab next time.

Welcome to Passions, smithdr~

smithdr
Junior Member

since 2006-02-25

Posts 26

8 posted 2006-02-25 08:08 PM

Thanks for all the kind replies.

Don't worry, next time I'll take my bike.

Cheers,

David

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-02-26 10:38 PM

I enjoyed it a great deal David. Welcome.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2006-03-14 02:00 PM

Enjoyed David.

and welcome to Pip.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2006-03-14 02:53 PM

welcome to Passions

advice, next time don't drink and drive...and I mean that in a kind way...for everyone's sake...

Looking forward to reading more of you

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