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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2006-02-24 05:57 PM


all dressed up, no place to go
and i'm all messed up
and i really dont know
where to
begin

i've got nowhere else but work to go
and my head still hurts
and im trying to show
myself
how to live

spending too much time
in just one place
dying, yearning for a fresh new face
as i
am so blue

im just in trouble
for the things i need
say
dont you want to be needed
too?



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Larry C
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1 posted 2006-02-24 06:49 PM


Yuppir. We all do. Well said. Peace my friend.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2007-08-12 07:36 AM


this was kind of an adaptation of a Counting Crows song that I like alot.. i changed the words around a little.. but the message remains the same

check it out for yourself

"Hey Monkey - Counting Crows"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-10-28 03:53 PM


enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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