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ManOfWolves28
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0 posted 2006-02-24 03:02 PM



I see her
I feel her
I love her.
She plays so much
I wish energy transfer applied to life.
Her energy makes me jealous.
But as they say,
Happiness comes in many sizes.
In my case it can fit in a shoe box.
Times were boring till I met her.
She lights up my days
and ambushes me at the coffee maker every morning.
It still doesnt change that I love her.
Them sad eye looks make me melt.
Them big eye looks during play time
Make me wonder if Im gonna be attacked.
Her needle sharp claws and teeth
Peirce me and make me tence.
Her name is Auraura and she lights up my life.

...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice.

© Copyright 2006 J. A. Griswold - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-02-24 11:31 PM


Very good! I liked the images and comparisons in this poem. Nice to meet you!!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

TexUS
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2 posted 2006-02-25 04:17 AM


Wonderful!

Made me smile

THANKS!

ManOfWolves28
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3 posted 2006-02-26 03:42 PM


Thanks.
I try to keep a variety of topics in mind and nearly every time I end up with either a master peice or just a peice of wasted writing. No worries though I still keep them for future purposes.

...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-02-26 06:17 PM



I think I have a couple of those at my house? Furry are they?

Enjoyed the read.

froggy
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5 posted 2006-03-09 06:47 PM


I love it

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

icequeen
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6 posted 2006-03-09 06:55 PM


More fun than a ball of yarn, this is

Caroline

Martie
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7 posted 2006-03-09 07:18 PM


I have one of those!
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