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...Cold feelings..
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...Cold feelings.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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. I store my feelings in the freezer carefully wrapped and labeled.. but ice-hard bundles tumble out when least expected crashing down.. crushed ice makes pools. I slip and fall It hurts to thaw. . |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A new favourite ! Into my library this gem goes. Hugs, Chris  |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
nothing more painful than confronting ones own needs arthur |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker frozen or thawed feelings can hurt. And this poem captures both the physical and emotional pain. A thought-provoking write indeed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is fantastic, Nancy! I mean the write, not the hurt feelings. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I store my feelings in the freezer carefully wrapped and labeled.. but ice-hard bundles tumble out when least expected crashing down.. crushed ice makes pools. I slip and fall It hurts to thaw. ***************************************** those blasted bundles, just when we think we have them under control guess it makes us human, like it or not |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One half of me wants to ask... what happened now? The THINKING half of me... says... Yes, i know. But that's what you do...always leave me, thinking. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thanks for your replies everyone. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Enchantress, in matters of the heart ain't thawing a good thing? Maybe you hadn't fell at all. :-) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love the honest, confessional style of this from you. It's my personal opinion of course, but I enjoy poetry most when it reads like a whisper in my hear. I felt you succeeded with this one. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"It hurts to thaw" Oh, yes, it does indeed, Nancy, but we always have to be in a bad place before a good place - don't ask my why though. Good write! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ I know this one ... as sometimes I am just one huge puddle of me~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Nancy that was beautiful. It hurts to feel. I loved that poem because we have to be strong and sometimes we get weary and let go. thank you for writing such a splendid poem. Hugs Kim |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
That's too cute. Especially the part about things falling out when least expected. Oh if only emotions could be put back as conveniently as green beans. Excellent work. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Don't I know the feeling! You conveyed so much, so well.. and in so few words. *Hugs* to you, Nancy~ |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
I love this one! Hugs, Kathy |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Short and powerful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good one.....understanding this well. ....jo |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Some deja-vu for me in this one... smile... Neeraja |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
So much said in so few words! Excellent work! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
You say it so very well Nancy - Paul |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
"it hurts to fall" how true !... a good one. from,paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Nancy, being a Scorpio especially and known for having such depth and holding secrets firmly, I can understand this poem ever so much, and believe when we do confront our deepest needs and such, we can't just rush them, we have to let them thaw naturally, for in doing otherwise it would feel unnatural! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most poignant, powerful verse, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Once again....Thank you everyone!! |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
I love this one! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
*icequeen thinks she would like to have this as her signature poem*  Amazingly powerful write, here. I so enjoy all of your work! Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is Great!!! |
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