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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-02-24 07:45 AM


Extremes

I’d like to write about extreme
Reality to subtle dream
From hottest hot to coldest cold
From threshold to that untold

A mental arrow from my bow
To targets beyond my know
With shaft of curiosity
And feathers of pure destiny

I would the point to pierce the mark
Into the core of light and dark
To strike a lightening thunder bolt
And open up this jail of dolt

I would beyond the grass is green
I would beyond the field of glean
I would beyond the seem of seem
And move beyond the subtle dream

Perhaps I seek beyond my breath
Perhaps the answer comes with death



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-02-24 08:28 AM


I suppose many answers will come with death, more then we can begin to fathom, but for now, while we're here we can certainly take advantage of the time...and create lotsa smiles, as you do us, each and every morning

Happy Friday

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2 posted 2006-02-24 12:33 PM


I wish you'd write of lighter things,
Spinning wheels, a caged bird that sings,
Nothing depressing or this extreme,
Today I surely read only a dream?

Nicely done Sir Sy.

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-02-25 02:00 AM




Excellent poem sir.

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4 posted 2006-02-25 06:31 AM


A mental arrow from my bow
To targets beyond my know
With shaft of curiosity
And feathers of pure destiny

I would the point to pierce the mark
Into the core of light and dark
To strike a lightening thunder bolt
And open up this jail of dolt

~*~

The archer in me
appreciated this a lot, Sy...

thank you for the pleasantries...

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-02-25 08:23 AM


LeeJ
Thank you sweety I agree,

Sharon,
Then read In a Meadow.

Lady,
Thank you My lady.

Sunshine,
Don't you just love to ramble. I do

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2006-02-25 08:58 AM


You give me such joy, sy.

You have a way of say of saying complicated things, simply.

That is an art, lovie.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-02-25 12:10 PM


serenity
You really are a love.

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