On This Hawaiian Afternoon

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Open Poetry #37

On This Hawaiian Afternoon

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-02-23 12:12 PM

On This Hawaiian Afternoon

A knock upon my door
and she walks in.
Miss Suzie has come
to see me again.

I'm excited to see her.
She does that to me.
She makes my heart
beat passionately.

We go to the lanai
to soak up some sun.
A little bit of tan
and lots of fun.

Like a Hong Kong movie
she entertains me.
On this Hawaiian afternoon
my heart is happy and free.

JamesLee
February22
2006

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

1 posted 2006-02-23 02:09 AM

mmmmm! Hawaii and sunshine in February...and someone special to share it with. Loverly!

~ K ~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-02-23 07:27 AM

this grabbed me and placed me right by the sea...nice write, thank you

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-02-23 04:16 PM

On this chilly desert afternoon, I am so pleased with this trip to a Hawaiian
afternoon. Thank you James. Beautiful.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2006-02-23 04:22 PM

Sounds like you had a wonderful afternoon James!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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