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BlueEyes
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since 2002-08-30
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TX, USA

0 posted 2006-02-22 11:19 PM



I implore you, search me deeply,
As if my eyes really are the windows to my soul

Explore me, find me, guide me, heal me
Enclose me deep within the warmth of your love

Show me, prove to me that this magic is real
And is something that is worth fighting for

Please, teach me again the song in my heart,
The melody is still there; I've just somehow forgotten the words

Hold me close; place your hand in the small of my back
As we slow dance through life, through love

Shatter the pieces of untrust
That have been so powerfully embedded into my heart
So that I can once again feel secure

My days have been too long without the warmth
of the sunshine on my face, the wind in my hair

I invite you along my journey,
With just one request...
Please don't stop to smell the roses
If you don't intend on staying a while...

© Copyright 2006 Tera - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2006-02-22 11:25 PM



I think the poetry
here is in the sincerity.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-02-22 11:35 PM





"I invite you along my journey,
With just one request...
Please don't stop to smell the roses
If you don't intend on staying a while..."


How lovely Tera.


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2006-02-23 12:09 PM


Nice...James
Enchantress
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4 posted 2006-02-23 08:58 AM


A most excellent write.
I especially love the last stanza.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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just out of reach
5 posted 2006-02-23 09:52 AM


I really can relate to this honest and open piece. Much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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