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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2006-02-22 07:53 PM



From the Eyes of a Child

Whenever I come face to face
With golden skies and child’s grace
I choose to rest my eyes upon
The very best of which I’m fond

I cannot seem to lift my head
To sun-streaked aureate and red
When all the joy of sunset skies
Is mirrored in a child’s eyes

There is no rainbow to be caught
More radiant than a child’s thought
No love more splendid to impart
Than that which fills a child’s heart

Into the April winds are tossed
In innocence forever lost
That lustrous depth of simple truth
Behind the tender eyes of youth

Whenever I come face to face
With golden skies and child’s grace
More radiance beams from little eyes
Than from the vast and glorious skies


Elizabeth Santos

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TexUS
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1 posted 2006-02-22 07:56 PM


Beautiful  
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2 posted 2006-02-22 07:56 PM


Mercy me!  I am so glad to see you are feeling better, and writing, and of course, it is of children.  Then again, you have the "American Dream" family, and those cherubs of yours would make anyone smile.  Love you m'friend.  Enjoy your visit won'tca?  You have NO idea how much I wish I were coming, but the year isn't over.
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3 posted 2006-02-22 08:19 PM


very nice read...much enjoyed

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

Martie
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4 posted 2006-02-22 09:19 PM


Liz...I love this poem, and you!!  
Waterfall27
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5 posted 2006-02-22 10:22 PM


Beautiful

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-02-22 10:39 PM


Elizabeth,
The grace of a grace. Beautiful

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-02-22 11:45 PM





"I cannot seem to lift my head
To sun-streaked aureate and red
When all the joy of sunset skies
Is mirrored in a child’s eyes"

A lovely poem and oh so true.



tracie66
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8 posted 2006-02-23 04:13 AM


Elizabeth~
what a marvelous poem - truly a treasure
~hugs~
Tracie

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It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



wanderingin
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9 posted 2006-02-23 10:20 AM


Lovely poem!  You are blessed!
LeeJ
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10 posted 2006-02-23 10:45 AM


There is no rainbow to be caught
More radiant than a child’s thought
No love more splendid to impart
Than that which fills a child’s heart


you have spoken volumns here, and touched the very essense of precious moments...

captivating read...which I pray everyone in the world takes time to see...

Hugs and thank you

icebox
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11 posted 2006-02-23 11:30 AM


"When all the joy of sunset skies
Is mirrored in a child’s eyes"

Wow!  Great lines in an excellent poem!



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12 posted 2006-02-25 09:20 PM


I really liked this.  I think I'm going to give a copy to my sister, who is expecting her 2nd child in June.  I know she would love it!

Tara

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13 posted 2006-02-25 10:20 PM


Nothing is seen clearer than when seen through a child's eyes. Lovely work, martyjo
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14 posted 2006-02-26 01:08 AM


Beautiful, Elizabeth!
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