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helenadepp
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since 2006-01-16
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durham, england

0 posted 2006-02-22 12:10 PM



On carousels
On bumper karts
I’ll try to make myself happy

With sweet sentiments
With little smiles
I’ll try to make myself happy

Eating cookies
Eating pancakes
I’ll try to make myself happy

Playing Nintendo
Playing golf
I’ll try to make myself happy

Downing vodka
Downing lies
Don’t ever say I didn’t try to make myself happy

© Copyright 2006 helen sewell - All Rights Reserved
Air Goddess
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 108
Canada
1 posted 2006-02-22 12:31 PM


Sometimes it is good to give up and
give in after so much effort....
It is balance...
Great poetry!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-02-24 12:08 PM




I love the turn this one took Helen.

FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

3 posted 2006-02-24 05:19 AM


very realistic..close to what many people are trying. To make ourselves happy.

Enjoyed it.

THank you.

helenadepp
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since 2006-01-16
Posts 59
durham, england
4 posted 2006-02-24 05:24 AM


thanks for all your comments
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-02-24 08:52 AM


to let go and allow things to balance out may be a good respit to focus on nothing, just relaxing and allow...


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