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helenadepp
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since 2006-01-16
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durham, england

0 posted 2006-02-22 12:00 PM



What’s the mission sergeant?
Are we going to war?
These feelings have to be broken
Before I shut the door

What’s the answer sergeant?
Are we going to war?
Trying for something better
Ending up where I was before

What’s wrong sergeant?
Are we going to war?
Seeing old faces
Faces I was trying to ignore

Come on sergeant
Are we going to war?
Trying to build bridges
When they’re rotten from the core

© Copyright 2006 helen sewell - All Rights Reserved
Air Goddess
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 108
Canada
1 posted 2006-02-22 12:28 PM


Hi there...
I like this one a lot...
it speaks volumes....
Well done :-)

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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2 posted 2006-02-24 12:05 PM




Most profound Helen. Well done.


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3 posted 2006-02-24 10:32 AM


" Curse Birnam Wood, would any one would burn ‘em.
But come we’ll show them once we do begin
We’re not sewn up although we are hemmed in,
Give blow for blow and stick to them like wax
At least we’ll die with harness on our backs."

It seems there's never a time when we aren't....though virtually every person on earth would have it otherwise.

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poetry_queen
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Posts 94
england,
4 posted 2006-02-24 11:01 AM


liked this alot
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