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FNG
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0 posted 2006-02-21 11:28 PM


On a sleepless night,
There's a light,
that silently lit the sky.

Lonely but surely,
You guided the tide.
To rise and fall,
as the time deems right.

With a luminous glow,
You made my emotions flow.
You became my friend,
On this sleepless night.

Crickets sing in a harmoniuos tune,
Accompany you,
rid you of gloom.

The people rested,
without a haste.
The clouds switch off their lights,
For fear of stealing your might.

The wind whistle a lullaby,
It didn't stay,
but said goodbye.

My heart grow fonder,
as i look at you.
I smile at you,
Cos you smile at me too.

Most of all,
I love you.
For God has created few....
As magnificent,
yet humble as you.


[This message has been edited by FNG (02-22-2006 06:15 AM).]

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Gaia
1 posted 2006-02-21 11:33 PM


FNG, what a lovely write!
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-02-21 11:57 PM



"Most of all,
I love you.
For God has created few,
As magnificent yet humble as you."

Very pretty FNG.

iliana
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3 posted 2006-02-22 12:51 PM


I agree, very pretty, FNG!
FNG
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4 posted 2006-02-22 12:57 PM


Thank you for kind words.

I wrote this when i couldn't fall asleep. LOL



XOx Uriah xOX
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5 posted 2006-02-22 01:24 AM


Wonderful write !   I really enjoyed this.
tracie66
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6 posted 2006-02-22 01:56 AM


a beautiful, enjoyable poem - a great read.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



FNG
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7 posted 2006-02-22 06:23 AM


Thanks to you Xox Uriah xoX and tracie.
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