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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-02-21 02:45 PM



No matter
What you say
Or do
So much still
Relies upon
How color changes

Moods
Thoughts
One’s—most intimate
Perceptions

Pale sky
Blue sea
A moment’s reverie

Beyond the dark
Dun branches



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steavenr
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1 posted 2006-02-22 01:14 AM


I must ask...is this about the old Pershing Road EL station in Chicago that has since been demolished?  It it is, this is brilliant...if not, it is still a great piece of writing.
Huan Yi
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2 posted 2006-02-22 11:28 PM


Steven,

Thanks for reading.

Close; actually Pershing Road in Waukegan,
(where, by the way, there's still a station).

Thanks again.

John

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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3 posted 2007-04-23 03:31 PM


A road, holds how many cars with stories happy and sad.

read.

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