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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-02-21 07:39 AM

were I a vanilla quixote
ajousting my mind suspension
on the empty pen of contemplation

draping cellophane ceilings
over the enteringnet
of my most private fence post

calling it a flag for some glory
with worms included
to devour the metal then

when tinfoil is the fuel
of lover's gift wraps
and their chocolates savoring

is the gum skinned edge of laughter

would I bleed my ink confusions
into the veins of those parchment's skins
redoing tattoos that were blurred

by the squinting eyes of statues
when they loaned their chevy's
to their mother-in-law’s strangers

for just the weekend's use of backseats
with the windows down for examinations
of the improper use of using

and calling it love song research
not for the notes but for the words
subcutaneous indelible

but seldom heart lipped verbatim

_______________
daark
scribblenote: something to do with love songs
and agape atonement

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-21-2006 09:21 AM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-02-21 08:02 AM

lovesongs
and atonement...

a perfect sound...

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-02-21 08:27 AM

you must live your life regardless of society's views...sometimes they don't know it all, yanno?

amiable ponderings, iced with lucious word dancing

Martie

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Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2006-02-21 10:21 AM

DS

"and calling it love song research
not for the notes but for the words
subcutaneous indelible

but seldom heart lipped verbatim"

Your usual wonderful!

Air Goddess
Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 108
Canada

4 posted 2006-02-21 11:12 AM

good thing u left a scribble note or
I would have misinterpreted it all over
again.....Some Poet I am... (~_*)

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2006-02-21 11:16 AM

ms sunshine, thanks for humming along on this.

_____________
ms Lee J, just music babe...just music and looking inside it to see where it comes from

________________
ms martie, thank you little neighbor lady..hope it wasn't too loud at 2 in the am..

___________

ms air G..I do enjoy your translations, always welcome ya know, thanks lady

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

6 posted 2006-02-21 02:09 PM

I think that true love probably needs a lot of research...Wavering truth, it's all so elusive.

Shenachie

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
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7 posted 2006-02-21 03:18 PM

MS Shenachie agreed, most anything genuine takes research to discover the true depth of it, thank you for the eyes here

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2006-02-22 02:58 PM

time and research
for true love?
takes a long time to know the true feeling of love~

and alot of internal searching
of ones self for know if love is
love or just
a need~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2006-02-22 02:59 PM

ms g..yep...but then again one has to start somewhere with the hopes it is more than just a song..thanks lady

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

10 posted 2006-02-22 03:32 PM

"their chocolates savoring"....melt in the mouth ...hums "It's just an old fashioned love song...hmmmmm, hmmmmum,hmmmmm,hmmmmmum hmmm!

Vanilla quioxte? now that's heart-lipped verbatum from windmills of your mind! Is that edge of laughter a smile I see? Somehow I don't see atonement for love songs. Every heart should have one!

~ karen ~

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (02-22-2006 10:24 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2006-02-22 03:38 PM

ms KL, now you went and did it..got my squishy all gummy with uh-huhs. and yes everyone should have a love song, mine is "born to be mildly pugnacious"

thanx lady

Klassy Lassy
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Oregon

12 posted 2006-02-22 03:52 PM

LOL ..... welcome!

MGROVES

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california

13 posted 2006-02-22 09:06 PM

born to be wild was mine:)

Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

14 posted 2006-02-22 10:04 PM

Awesome as ever Dark, kudos.

gum skinned edge of laughter

very nice. Ed

"Give me a museum, and I'll fill it."
- Pablo Picasso

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

15 posted 2006-02-22 10:26 PM

MGroves... I was just waiting for someone to post that

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