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jinx26
Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38
Jersey

0 posted 2006-02-20 07:47 PM



I feel so small and out of place....
The tears fall so rapidly now....
My sanity is slipping away....
I'm tring so hard to hang on....
but I hurt....
My head whispers..let go....
So the hurt will end....
I'm broken....
I won't mend....
He took all that I am with his hurtfull words....
One blow to the stomach....
His hands around my neck....
I'm left.. crumpled on the floor....
I whisper.. I hate you with my last breath....
I feel so small....
With nothing left....

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Air Goddess
Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108
Canada
1 posted 2006-02-20 09:18 PM


So Small...
Lets hope that he is the one
feeling SO SMALL instead...

A great paint job with words...
this poem of yours....

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