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In Silence... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
in silence... dawn fades velvet beauty pinprick stars wink out above languid dark mountains silhouette songs for Venus, dissolute sleeps in golden chambers while distant waves roar turquoise against dull thoughts dreams satin strategies under the wings of ravens ... and a wish to fly 9/26/05 [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (02-20-2006 07:47 PM).] |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
this is quite beautiful... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you, and for taking the time. It's always nice to know when a poem works! Karen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karen~ Oh ... it 'works' alright~ GORGEOUS~ Just GORGEOUS~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful, Lassy! You have woven together sounds in such a way that they make the thoughts glide smoothly across the page and fall lightly on the ear. Very good work  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It works Karen and it's lovely... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Mike, I'm delighted to have your comment and encouragement on my poetry! Looking at the number of posts you have made and the incredible poems you have written, I am in awe! Hugs, Karen |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lady, so pleased to have your sweet reply, as well! ~ Karen ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
KL, you make me look up now to see if it looks the same from here enjoyed it ms |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely piece of work...simply exquisite. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
after reading this, wishing I could fly to... very nice write |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful imagery in this write. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
This is so beautiful that I have decided that you are a magic flight instructor with your incredible desciptions. I now see the dawn of a new day in a wonderful new way. Shenachie |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Dark Stranger: May your thoughts rise turquoise as surf in sunshine! _________ Hugs, beautiful Nancy, always happy to see you! Glad you enjoyed. __________ Lee, you are not alone in your wish to fly...sigh...me, too! Last time I looked it was only shoe leather express.__________ Thank you, scorpio! Nice to see you again, too! __________ Bridget, flight instructor... wouldn't that be nice! That would mean I had some wings. __________ Warn wishes to you all. Hugs |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
KL, what a cool read! I enjoyed this immensely! |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Now, that is most definitely a horizon's song... excellent imagery... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite soft infinity flight! - Owl |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful images expressed Hope |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Hi, Hope... thank you for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed. ~ Karen |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I loved this poem , it hit home ... glad I read it !!! In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
KL I have written many times about flying ...I see you seek wing also. Wonderful poem! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Aujussy: Nice to meet you! Glad you enjoyed my morning muse. ~ Karen ~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Martie: You are so right! And I've never been anywhere to speak of except in my mind. Hugs Karen |
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