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Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 80
Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2006-02-20 06:18 PM


The saddest songs cannot express how I feel without you

Your scent is everywhere

Thoughts of you always on my mind

The feeling of your touch lingers on my skin

Visions of the way things used to be play in my head

I wish I could close my eyes and make things right

I'd give anything to have you back

To be safely held in your firm arms

To know I mean as much to you as you mean to me


© Copyright 2006 Danielle Lefebvre - All Rights Reserved
Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

1 posted 2006-02-20 07:42 PM


We have all felt this way.... However in time another comes along and we find love all over again, and if we are lucky love will be shared by both.
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2006-02-25 04:15 PM


Your poem captures the angst of a heart that yearns.

Nicely done, and a belated welcome to you, Danielle.  

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