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IntoTheRain
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 51
Westwood, CA

0 posted 2006-02-20 05:10 PM

The tower of your heart
A lighthouse searching
Time laden mist
Veils
The unforgettable

The banners blazing
Caught in the wind flowing
The voices rise, singing
The echoes dying in the hills
A defeat
For ever having fought

Impregnable
Insatiable
The eyes that saw to the heart of this

The sighing
Trapped in the branches
As a season drifts
The long grass dancing
Remembering

A statue with
Arms asunder
From the valley
Yearning
For ivory pinnacles

A pale lonely beauty
An everlasting rose
Pink hued petals fading
Each immortal moment
Forgetful
The trumpet call dies
The sun passing
Blood red hills
A cold white tower
Silence
Artificial star light

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-02-20 05:13 PM

Well this is an interesting write..enjoyed the flow of words..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2006-02-25 04:39 PM

Love your title and your graceful flow of words.

Beautiful poem, Rob~

smithdr
Junior Member

since 2006-02-25

Posts 26

3 posted 2006-02-25 04:44 PM

I usually don't like poems about roses since they are a bit overdone. However, this one works.

Still, I find it hard to get excited over roses.

David

thanks for the read

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-02-25 04:48 PM

This piece likes me...
enjoyed so much.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

5 posted 2006-02-25 04:57 PM

This was an interesting, thought provoking poem. bravo. Hugs Kim

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-02-26 01:38 AM

"Impregnable
Insatiable
The eyes that saw to the heart of this"

I enjoyed this poem.

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