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sea princess of Venice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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meadow songs predicting waterfall decibels amidst surreal open sea scapes the tide, the tide of giggly woman releasing sense and sensibility, in loose circles of optimism with word perfume fossilized in paintbrushes sounds like a permeable tide languidly lapping my ankles oh so toxin to the ear drum to the mind to the soul herding imagined virginity of daydreams like an oceanic syndrome invisibly assassinating my will post dimensional mezzanine of life sprouting by some human classical intermingling layers of openings foam and spray formed by the oneness of distant horizons bound together by some undomesticated component I tremble, while sipping this daiquiris free to dream, with manic ability shrouded in this drifting mystery crawls me to some apex of pyramidal moonlight, white gloved fingers of sea whisper wind’s mediterranean words full of mighty movement, faintly hissing in the sand Oh, this feverish affair with God’s profound novel, in faith of mankind and the meaning of life happiness, grows perception of soul-searching sea, has it’s feeding frenzy with me a gift of memories… how could anyone resist this sea princess of Venice |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Such memorable and epic words are rarely witnessed in these days of sublunary mundanity...your words are testement to the human minds ability to describe things with a new eye and joyful heart..thank you Lee you are a drop of glinting amber on a shore full of pebbles... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
I love the Sea Princess of Venice... Great ending... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice Lee J!! JL  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Exquisite LeeJ. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ok, Lee you've got me out to sea with this one drifting across time and space but in a memory of a ship that tossed everyone about in a storm, holding on for dear life and when someone tried to hold onto me well, I told him 'tis too late, m'dear but then, that's another old volume  and I know it has nothing to do with your story  but you'll hear me out, sister Lee |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really lovely andd refreshing, Lee!  ....jo |
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