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the swallowing stones |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I wondered of the doorways the trio of entertainment like welcome matted music with barefoot new shoeshines and your eyes without the veils which window would they open first if I was their strangest safety like momma told you about then before you were a woman tree with fragile limbs and leaves that sometimes you moved aside in case the moon was curious I watched your mouth go dry when you looked closely at the key wondering how it would sound in the damp locked secrets and would I still love you more than the wind's tomorrow if you wanted three more rooms in your castle and three more times to write a new book of yesterday ___________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a new book of yesterday, which unshelves all the right reasons for everything happening... deliciously felt...wishing you and she a basket of good luck... happy write D. |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
"And her eyes without the veils, which windows would they open first" Hmmmm..let's see......I think I would open the window leading to sensual poetry....grin... Great poem all over again... I love it too much (~_*) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Lee J, thanks lady friend ________________ ms airG, yes, me too, thank you for the review |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that sometimes you moved aside in case the moon was curious she is curious, yellow the curves she carves in the aching spaces of her mantree |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
...like momma told you about then before you were ... --- I remember voices close to the ear of truths that only I would hear and then they faded away... and this, dear poet, is what you have recalled. As for the book? May this friend of yours write longing so. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"before you were a woman tree with fragile limbs and leaves that sometimes you moved aside in case the moon was curious" Beautiful as always Stranger. |
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