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3 O'clock
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3 O'clock |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643
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Seeking with stained eyes We prepare ourselves for each other Talking of dreams and passions, hoping They interlock somehow. It was raining brightly with the sun at our backs Umbrellas perched upward, keeping shelter Everyday at 3 o’clock we passed normally In the park, this day we spoke Smiling… |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh yes Page. I love this one.  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Well thanks again lady. You are a loyal reader I admire that... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this day we spoke Smiling… I understand this~~  M |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Yes I think we all somehow understand this. Thank you.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Can’t wait until the next time! Nice write. JL  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thanks James and JL |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Sometimes, hope is where the hat is hung.  Well done, Dominique. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Nice. I really liked this!  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you both. I am thrilled you enjoyed it... |
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