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Sadelite
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0 posted 2006-02-19 03:18 PM



Blues, the Bathtub Blues

Heat me more my baby before the water leaves
Heat me more in teardrops
Cleanse me in my grief.
You are water, forgiving of my sins,
You are my miracle uplifting me again.
Heat me more my baby before the water leaves.

          ~Sadie~



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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-02-19 03:19 PM



Oh yessss Sadelite! Wonderful blues!


ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2006-02-19 03:45 PM


Good to read you again Sadie.
Neat write.
TD

iliana
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3 posted 2006-02-20 12:33 PM


This is terrific!  
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2006-02-20 03:21 AM


sexy sadie!
tracie66
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5 posted 2006-02-20 04:29 AM


Sadie~
enjoyed!
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2006-02-20 07:09 AM


If I want to lift the blues, I head straight for my tub...

nicely done

M

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