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Come Naked
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Come Naked |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada 
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Come Naked Strip off your old, hot, red sophistication Shed your lazy air of desperation Peel off your anger and frustration And remove your pair of discrimination Cast aside bracelets of blame Disrobe your gloves of shame Step out of your boots of ire Walk away from evil desire Then stand outside in the rain And wash away guilt and pain Launder cloying cologne of lies And rinse away flaky, white guiles Free-flowing from the river of above Drink raindrops of infinite love Splash yourself with fragrance of truth And a dash of eternal, glowing youth You are ready to open new doors; this is the key Come as a new born baby, naked and free You are now qualified to enter a new world Your new birth is about to unfurl |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
I enjoyed that immsensely. I liked the comparison of emotional and envrionmental taints, being associated to clothing, and nudity being what is most pure, and basic. Bravo! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and then we die the old and grow the new skin well imagined ms |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Desert-Spike, Thanks for leaving your thoughts for me. It means a lot to me. |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Mr. Stranger...yes, and then we die the old.....and grow the new... the wheel of Samsara constantly turning... Thanks..... |
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