when i take my last breath

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Open Poetry #37

when i take my last breath

poetry_queen
Member

since 2006-02-02

Posts 94
england,

0 posted 2006-02-19 10:34 AM

i want to grow old with you darling
i want life to be good to us
i want a lifetime of memories to
build and cherish around you.

i want to be everything you ever
dreamed i could be and offer you
yet i know one day my name will
be read in the book of names.

when that day, that moment comes,
with my last breath i pledge
to whisper you ahve made every
dream i dared dream come true.

you put the joy seen in my eyes
you put the softness in my touch
the laughter i heard in my voice
the passion when we made love.

few things i have wanted to feel
but a happy life has been one
i love you more than the past, more
than today, even more tomorrow.

you have shown me within my heart
that you are truly unselfish
and my darling, i hope that i also have
shown you the depth of my love.

i will lvoe you each day, as if it was
my last moment to say 'i love you'
my last thought before i fall asleep
will be to feel your kiss in the morning.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-02-19 11:14 AM

Leanne~
This is very loving and nice to read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-02-20 05:05 PM

Enjoyed Leanne.

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

3 posted 2006-02-20 05:07 PM

::smiles:: Beautiful !

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2006-02-20 05:11 PM

Only love can make you feel that way..enjoyed this precious read..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2006-02-22 10:54 AM

Thank you much...I enjoyed the read.
INclan

helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

6 posted 2006-02-22 12:03 PM

I truly enjoyed it. Looking forward to more!

wanderingin
Junior Member

since 2006-02-03

Posts 39

7 posted 2006-02-22 01:38 PM

mmmmm, so sweet! Ain't love grand?!

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