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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Resting I’m resting under dancing leaves That stirs my minds naive believe Spilling thoughts like waters fall I feel desire hear its call I join the shadows move in space My spirit lifts in dancing grace I feel the presence of the breeze I feel the essence of the trees Without a sound each shadow slips Twirls my spirit and then it dips I am entwined within a seem It feels so real and not a dream My mind is entertaining life I dance the dance of forests fife And I have turned its secret key To be as one the trees and me Acceptance is an open door The dance is but a wish for more |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Acceptance is an open door The dance is but a wish for more I am trying that...harder than one thinks... Good Morning, Sy  M |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
ah yes the tree of life bearing fruit seeping sweet nector as a breeze gives life to spirit to fly free like the leaves reaching out giving its flesh and nector to nurish and replenish then the heart of the fruit is all that is left,keeping whats sacred inside safe, seed, gods seed,a soul.which god gave to create. spirit heart soul become as one, giving birth , first born, true first born, not first child born to man, as fruit to tree, which keeps life flowing for eternity. to torment first born as one's predictions from a society of creating destruction of gods and the very trees and flowers and honey from bees, nector of life, yes trees are baring more than fruit if there were no trees there would be no you or me oh, sorry have not had these moments for a long while. its so embarrsing . but i guess it was meant to happen My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, I know you are.  MGROVES From the words of this mould You have sifted gold.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In between the step livelies... a rest is but opportunity to watch the others sway in time... Sy, so good to see you smiling in this one...   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Who could help but smile when you shine. |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
really enjoyed this one  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
poetry_queen Thank you for the read and comment. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"My mind is entertaining life I dance the dance of forests fife And I have turned its secret key To be as one the trees and me" Delightful! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There is a vitality to this piece, a zest for life..like coming upon something for the first time and loving the newness..enjoyed the read Sy..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Goldenrose, Always a pleasure to read your comments. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Royalty in evergreen, the windy lime of spring, or the golds and reds of fall....all suffuses the spirit in whispers and colors! You give the trees a bewitching quality in this poem! Karen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy Lassy Now that's a klassy answer. Thank you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I don't know why, but guess what imagine I got from this? Your pinkies sticking out of the stream we both have grown to love so much through our mutual friend. You rest! Hah! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...You made a stream gurgle and the breeze sing for me just now....and it was so pretty! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
BRAVO! Sy~ I loved this, the imagery and flow just delightful....perfectly penned ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, It's a delight being in a steam with you. LOL Martie Thank you dear. tracie66 I am pleased you were pleased. |
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