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Lost In Words |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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(Where There Is/Is There Love) entangled in uncertainties wishing for the daze of innocence conflict pushing the unfinished words touching the heart of me comparison, a phantom of my opera where nothing means what it should and everything belongs to someone else how can I not doubt this path laid out before me stopped by the need for nurturing and the green eyes that invade my blue always there to blend the hazel into my days of gray I take shelter within my own skin good enough for me even if not for you... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful~ warms this ol skin of mine on this cold wet morn.  My spirit will rise |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I picked out several quotes until I realized I was qouting it all. This is excellent! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...my opera... ...this path laid out before me... ...good enough... ~*~  |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
this is such a fab poem, please keep up the good work |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
MGROVES, thank you, some days are like that...needing the warmth that isn't there. icebox, made me smile thinking of those quotes too hard to pick out...thank you  Karilea, been one of those weeks when the path laid out doesn't seem to be enough  poetry_queen, thank you for the read and response. M |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Warmth can always be found where friends reside. Well written and I liked the flow. Thanks for sharing, Maureen. |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
"comparison, a phantom of my opera where nothing means what it should and everything belongs to someone else" That stanza stands out in my mind. Thanx for a wonderful read. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...I know what you mean, sometime things never go right or seem to be good enough.Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Excellent piece, M-Lady! ...jo |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
"I take shelter within my own skin good enough for me even if not for you..." What more can EVER be said? Good Job! Hugs, Kathy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW! fantastic write - I enjoyed this very much BRAVO sweetie ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
JesusChristPose, sometimes friends aren't enough. desert-spike, thank you for reading. Paul, yes some days no matter what you do or say, you don't get ahead of yesterday. iliana, thank you...just some morning feelings Kathy, I haven't much choice but to like/accept the skin I am in. tracie66, thank you for the read and comment M |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
"JesusChristPose, sometimes friends aren't enough." ~ Now that, I can understand. ~ And Maureen, you can call me Mike if you wish to, afterall, we have known each other on Piptalk for quite a few years now. "If this grand panaorama before me is what you call God... then God is not dead." |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This entire write could be taken more than one way... this in particular: "comparison, a phantom of my opera where nothing means what it should and everything belongs to someone else" of course I think the entire write was good and then He created the horse... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A good write here M...i think most people recognise these words...and that is what makes it good..thank you.. Goldenrose Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Mike, sorry, my mind went blank for a moment when trying to recall names...the flu can do that to you. Hope you are enjoying PA. Skyfire, yes it was meant to be taken more than one way...my thoughts are scattered at times. Phil, thank you always for reading me. M |
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