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Open Poetry #37

Make-up

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

0 posted 2006-02-19 01:49 AM

Colours powdered,
pat on to perfection.

Flaws covered,
to non-existence.

Of greens on eyelids,
like leaves on olive trees.

Reds of cherry,
On lips of burning fiery.

Blushed cheeks,
Sakura against snow sheet.

Brown on brows,
Carved to bow.

Eyelashes flickered,
as the butterfly wings.

Calls to the lads,
a mate to win.

Make-up beautifies,
Pale and frail maiden.
Had our confidence heightened.

Air Goddess
Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 108
Canada

1 posted 2006-02-19 12:51 PM

The power of makeup!
(~_*) Great poem!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-02-20 05:10 PM

"Blushed cheeks,
Sakura against snow sheet."

This is lovely.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2006-02-20 05:22 PM

Finely tuned descriptions here...enjoyed the read..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

4 posted 2006-02-20 07:56 PM

What an exquisite painting...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2006-02-20 11:05 PM

Well I have to tell you this trick only works so long, trust me! LOL, but enjoyed the illusion that it covers all at least for a little while, and really enjoyed your poem.

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

6 posted 2006-02-21 04:24 AM

Thank you all for reading and comments

Make-up makes me a changed person...lol

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