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Krystopher Morris
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Ancient land called Chivalry

0 posted 2006-02-19 12:52 PM


I seek an angel
I look for love
I want my heart taken
lifted on the wings of a dove

But why is that angels
always take demons
and demons always hurt
the angels for no reason

Angels have eyes
that they never use
but they have hearts
that they always accuse

When a saint comes along
he is never seen
Evil triumphs over good
The evil reigns supreme

The saint wanders on
broken and untaken
looking for his angel
his heart forsaken


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FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

1 posted 2006-02-19 01:02 AM


you have decribed my feeling here too.

Like this part the best.  

'But why is that angels
always take demons
and demons always hurt
the angels for no reason'



Krystopher Morris
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since 2002-11-11
Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry
2 posted 2006-02-19 01:11 AM


Thank you for the comment. This is the first poem I've written in two years due to a massive writers block. I learned that the stress of a novel undone makes one give up on writing all together. I just got tired of the loss of love emotion in my heart, So I put it into words.

"Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep." -Lord Byron

FNG
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3 posted 2006-02-19 01:51 AM


Glad you are writing again, after two years.

Hope to see more of your writings here.

Regards
FNG

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2006-02-19 02:37 AM


Krystopher~
hope your writers block has come undone - love to see more from you.
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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