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dgvarner
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0 posted 2006-02-18 11:20 PM


Who could see me the way he does…
Who, as pushing my hair back
     with his big warm hands,
Loves the look on my face
As I feel every bit of him against me
Beneath me
Loving me…
Who could love this heart of mine
     quite the way he does…
Who, as pulling me closer,
Tells me I am beautiful in spite of my self
That no matter what this outer shell becomes
It is more the heart of me that entices his soul
For wanting more of me…
Who could know me better than he…
Who, as showing me my human flaws
     in such a gentle way,
Explains to me why that little girl is who she is
Why she does the things she does—
     She sees me—
Who but he could tell me that…
It is he, this man who saved me from myself
This man I unwittingly found while giving up
     on finding him
Who could be the one the way he is…
Only he…

dgvarner
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"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

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FNG
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1 posted 2006-02-19 01:07 AM


This touches my heart.

How I wish I could find the 'He' in my life.

XOx Uriah xOX
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2 posted 2006-02-19 01:15 AM


Very beautifully written !   ::smiles::   Thank you for sharing this.
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2006-02-19 01:34 AM


It is more the heart of me that entices his soul
For wanting more of me…
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There you have it!!  We should all be so lucky!
I'm really lovin' your poetry, but you knew that already!  

Hugs to you sweet one.

tracie66
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4 posted 2006-02-19 02:47 AM


g~
this is just beautiful, a very heartfelt write...I enjoyed!
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Kathy
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5 posted 2006-02-19 02:50 AM


Oh my..you must know "who"

enjoyed,

Thanks and Hugs,
Kathy

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6 posted 2006-02-19 04:03 AM


*sigh*

This is beautiful

and then He created the horse...

MGROVES
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7 posted 2006-02-19 07:20 AM


heart and soul   where love is real
   and beauty is seen from within  for love  to be truly felt,  it is given from within   a soul  a heart  a spirit    

    not many know real love
       as they  dont feel
         only  see  and lust
    and satisfy a need.  

your truly blessed
    

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2006-02-19 08:12 AM


one of the loveliest poems, and the way it should be...


M

dgvarner
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9 posted 2006-02-19 04:55 PM


FNG..I wish for you to find your "he" too..It's such a wonderful find!  
URIAH..Thanks so much!
BLUES..Yes, It's an awesome gift my husband gives to me everyday!! So glad you're enjoying my poetry--it's so seldom I get to play in the blue, to read and to share....
TRACIE..Thank you!
KATHY..I DO know "who"!  Glad you enjoyed!
SKYFIRE..Thanks for the "*sigh*".... It says so much!
MGROVES..Thank you for such a beautiful reply! I am indeed truly blessed!
M..Thanks a bunch!

Thank you all for reading..It's so fun to be here when I can steal away from the daily routine and responsibilities (which basically means I've left my house in a shambles and the kids are calling "MAAAAA-MAAAAA......"  LOL)  

Hugs, g

Rainbowdust
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10 posted 2006-02-19 10:02 PM


Whoa.. this absolutely took my breath away. Such a poetic description of the way love should always be!! A keeper for sure.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Sunshine
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11 posted 2006-02-19 10:50 PM



Now....

This is romanticism in all of
its finest form....

and I am wowed....

and awed.

Excellent work!


dgvarner
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12 posted 2006-02-20 10:13 AM


RAINBOWDUST..So glad to have taken your breath away!  COOL!
SUNSHINE..Thank you so much!!

So happy to have you reading me!

hugs, g

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2006-02-21 05:48 PM


Touching me softly...James
dgvarner
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14 posted 2006-02-22 08:29 PM


JAMESMICHAEL..     so glad you enjoyed...
thanks for reading!!

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

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