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tracie66
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0 posted 2006-02-18 10:22 PM


WOW!
she is ready
wings expanding beyond belief
her colours more beautiful
than ever imagined
and in time everyone will see
her colours shining
her freedom showing
butterfly on pages blue
everyone looking at you
all in your own time
you will fly free
escaping from your cocoon
to shine like you always knew you would
like you know you can
fly free butterfly
and shine


For Leanne aka poetry_queen - inspired by her poem butterfly

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



© Copyright 2006 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2006-02-18 10:48 PM


And I'm telling our Chipmunk would have liked this too. Well done Tracie.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

dgvarner
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2 posted 2006-02-18 10:59 PM


very nice..   enjoyed!

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-02-18 11:58 PM





So enchanting tracie.

tracie66
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4 posted 2006-02-19 12:05 PM


you're right Larry thanks for reading and I appreciate your reply

~hugs~
Tracie

g~
I'm so pleased you enjoyed ~hugs~
Tracie

Lady~
appreciate your reply - thanks
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2006-02-19 12:27 PM


Your poem is a thoughtful one,
filled with a sense of wonder!

Very nice, Tracie~

Martie
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6 posted 2006-02-19 12:53 PM


Words to help someone fly, for sure!  
Krystopher Morris
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7 posted 2006-02-19 12:54 PM


I like this. It have a nice imagery.

-Krys-

"Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep." -Lord Byron

tracie66
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8 posted 2006-02-19 02:33 AM


Bluesy~
Martie~
Krystopher~
thanking you all for your comments, I appreciate every one of them - everyone needs to shine
~hugs~
Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



iliana
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9 posted 2006-02-22 03:23 AM


What a very sweet dedication, Tracie!  Lovely write.   ....jo
tracie66
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10 posted 2006-02-23 04:09 AM


Thanks Jo
winged ~hugs~ my friend
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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