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poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02
Posts 94
england,

0 posted 2006-02-18 07:21 PM


Tears in your eyes,
blinking away mistakes
you've made.
Droplets falling from your cheeks.
The memory of past.
A tissue wipes away the fears
of knowing you're not there
To help her.
She's holding on
to nothingness :
grasping for air - but falling.
She can't hold on.
Too far gone.
You know it's over now,
but the pain's still there ;
more than ever.
You left her : but she can't
hold on
not on her own.
She dares not to scream
and wake her surroundings
Everywhere reflections of memory -
and letting go.
She didn't hold on.

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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
1 posted 2006-02-18 09:59 PM


Leanne~
this is so sad, such heartfelt longing and loss
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2006-02-18 11:34 PM


sad..   
but nicely written..

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-02-19 04:37 PM





Heartbreaking leanne... and wonderfully crafted.

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