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poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02
Posts 94
england,

0 posted 2006-02-18 07:20 PM



stumbling in the dark
trying to find my way.
waiting for you to call my name
instead of making me stray.
i head towards the light,
but only darkness guides me.
leads me to the shadows
why couldnt you leave me be?
i claw my way through
and feel pain seep into my skin.
ive lost the will to live,
why couldnt you let me in.
you pushed me away
till all i could do was hide.
you watched me shed the tears
couldnt you have tried
to let me say im sorry
that i wanted you again
instead of releasing all this hurt,
letting me feel all this pain.
but now im lost,
and cant find the lost light.
i should have tried harder
and put up a fight.
but again i was weak
and let you take charge,
and for that im a coward,
left alone in the dark.

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-02-19 08:43 AM


definitely leaves one feeling lost...


M

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2006-02-20 04:18 AM


heartfelt plea - ~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



helenadepp
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since 2006-01-16
Posts 59
durham, england
3 posted 2006-02-20 06:30 AM


This was soo touching...i feel like that myself and i know how bad it is..*hugs*
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