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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2006-02-18 04:54 PM



The strike of the bell
startles the trees,
and lost in blue acres,
a once blooming tower
is missing its people;

as sense lost direction;

and now just the waves
fill in these blank spaces,
holding the sky up,
balancing faith
upon eachother's inflection.

*in solidarity with suzie*

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-20-2006 09:40 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-02-18 05:00 PM


understanding your words~~


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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2006-02-19 01:01 AM


and now just the waves
fill in these blank spaces,
holding the sky up,
balancing faith
upon eachother's inflection.

yea that, says it all!!

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
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3 posted 2006-02-19 02:55 AM


~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



bklynboy
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florida
4 posted 2006-02-20 07:51 PM


okey dokey
iliana
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5 posted 2006-02-22 03:27 AM


.....jo
INclan
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6 posted 2006-02-22 11:04 AM


Thank you for posting.  I really enjoyed this.  Might it be that we all died a little that day?
INclan

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