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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-02-18 07:32 AM



I always wondered about the weather there
in the other places of your mind
but I guessed it was something summer
since your smiles were usually exposed

and there was a barefoot tiptoe too
in many somethings you said
the small talk tan thigh words
that you let me touch with thoughts

that you said were chilly at first
but you warmed them up soon
with lean over and kiss foreheads
that were just enough innocent

to make me blush for looking down
your loose fitting conversations
where ample willing was braless
with scoop necked hemline views

and you even dared me just to listen


___________

daark

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-02-18 09:54 AM



You must have listened very well,
indeed...



A weekend glorious
now that the sun has returned
to shine and lift...


Air Goddess
Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108
Canada
2 posted 2006-02-18 10:06 AM


Daark, you are a true poetic mirror
with the capability to
reflect the true curves
of the sacred feminine in your poems...

There are Poets and there are Poets of Poets!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2006-02-18 10:15 AM


Sunshine, thanks lady for the visit to this suggestion

___________
goddess of air, you blush me with your review, thanks to you sensual one

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2006-02-18 11:07 AM


Absolutely one of your best ever DS.
Subtley sensual in the sun.  
Loved this m'friend.

Ratleader
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5 posted 2006-02-18 11:20 AM


Some women are all too easy to miss, aren't they? Sounds like you're thinking of one, this morning.

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MGROVES
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6 posted 2006-02-18 02:26 PM


thoughts that leave a warm embrace
forever within ~  
touches
that  give light to a soul


peace   my friend
  

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Martie
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7 posted 2006-02-18 03:25 PM


DS

"and you even dared me just to listen"

I have a feeling that you understand the importance of listening.  



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