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jinx26
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since 2005-12-12
Posts 38
Jersey

0 posted 2006-02-18 12:45 PM



I'm missing you....

I danced at the Ordega..till 2.
It was hot..I sweat alone....
This made me think of you more....
It was errotic.... bodies pressed together....
I was having with-draw....
And leaving the club....
My clothes, damp with sweat....
The cold wind blows and my body shutters  
Static shock runs through me....
And still I think of you....
The half moon hangs low in the dark sky....
And sadness fills me...

I miss you and always will....

[This message has been edited by jinx26 (02-20-2006 05:14 PM).]

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-02-18 10:21 PM




I enjoyed this jinx! Pure honesty.


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