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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-02-17 11:43 PM



Of Course I Do


I do want my name
to softly and sweetly
pass upon her lips.

I do want to be
the recipient of
her tenderness.

I do want to
know those soft
places within
her heart.

I do want to stay
within her thoughts
each time we are apart.


JamesLee
February15
2006

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FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

1 posted 2006-02-17 11:46 PM


romantic and sweet
Air Goddess
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since 2006-02-11
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2 posted 2006-02-18 09:33 AM


Then all you gotta do is to soft and sweetly
pass her name and the rest of her upon your lips ....of course....many times... too many times...
then one day you will be able to stand back and watch the magic unfold...  lol
This will work for some...

Anyway, great poem... I felt like a pebble
being washed over gently by softly, flowing
water....

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-02-18 05:33 PM


Don't we all???

Nice~~
M

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-02-19 12:10 PM




Charming, James.



dgvarner
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5 posted 2006-02-19 12:11 PM


Have you told her "I do"?  

sweet poem
hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2006-02-21 05:46 PM


Thank you FNG, Air Goddess, nakdthoughts, The Lady and dgvarner for the nice responses.
Yes, I have told her many times...me and my honey have been together for years, yet each new day she is exciting and refreshing...James

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