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FNG
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0 posted 2006-02-17 11:40 PM


White fluffy sheeps.
Grazing the blue,
swiftly they fleet.

Wind like shepherd
Guiding them through the breeze.

Can I be a nomad,
And drift like that?
With freedom and carefree steps.

Yes I can,
when Jesus comes.

Thank Jesus,
Blessed are his sheeps.


[This message has been edited by FNG (02-18-2006 01:20 AM).]

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Air Goddess
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since 2006-02-11
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1 posted 2006-02-18 11:04 AM


Yes we are blessed sheep indeed...
Hope we all evolved into shepherds
sooon so that poor Jesus have less
on his hand trying to keep  us all in
line...  What a tough job for only
one Shepherd!
Great poem!  I love the lines "wind like shepherd...guiding them through the breeze"
Powerful!

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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2 posted 2006-02-18 10:40 PM




"Can I be a nomad,
And drift like that?
With freedom and carefree steps."

Terrific lines FNG.


FNG
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3 posted 2006-02-19 01:12 AM


Thank you again.

I always envvy the clouds in the sky.


FNG
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4 posted 2006-02-19 01:31 AM


Yes, hope i can be a shepherd to others one day.


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